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[Peter Green <peter AT greenpete.free>]

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Hi,

Thanks for that, I think you're right, so I have changed it. Not quite
as you said, what do you think?

http://www.opennicproject.org/

Peter


On 17/01/13 09:13, mike wrote:
> 
> Regarding http://www.opennicproject.org
> 
> I think the punctuation might be a little confusing here, and may 
> require a double-take on the part of the first-time reader:
> 
> "Are you looking for an alternative DNS provider, that is open and 
> democratic – Concerned about censorship?"
> 
> Isn't that two separate sentences posed as two distinct questions?
> 
> Also I don't believe the comma after 'provider' is required.
> 
> Perhaps something like the following?
> 
> "Are you looking for an alternative DNS provider that is open and 
> democratic? – Concerned about censorship?"
> 
> Alternatively, perhaps combined into a single sentence as follows?
> 
> "Are you looking for an alternative DNS provider that is open and 
> democratic, or are you concerned about censorship?"
> 
> Website looks and works great! Nice work guys!
> 
> --Mike
> 
> 
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