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- From: mike <mike AT pikeaero.com>
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- Subject: [opennic-discuss] Website Punctuation
- Date: Thu, 17 Jan 2013 03:13:10 -0600
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Regarding http://www.opennicproject.org
I think the punctuation might be a little confusing here, and may
require a double-take on the part of the first-time reader:
"Are you looking for an alternative DNS provider, that is open and
democratic – Concerned about censorship?"
Isn't that two separate sentences posed as two distinct questions?
Also I don't believe the comma after 'provider' is required.
Perhaps something like the following?
"Are you looking for an alternative DNS provider that is open and
democratic? – Concerned about censorship?"
Alternatively, perhaps combined into a single sentence as follows?
"Are you looking for an alternative DNS provider that is open and
democratic, or are you concerned about censorship?"
Website looks and works great! Nice work guys!
- --Mike
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- [opennic-discuss] DNS server, waqas, 01/06/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, David Norman, 01/06/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, waqas, 01/06/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Jeff Taylor, 01/06/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Christopher, 01/07/2013
- [opennic-discuss] Website Punctuation, mike, 01/17/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] Website Punctuation, Simon, 01/17/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] Website Punctuation, Peter Green, 01/17/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] Website Punctuation, mike, 01/17/2013
- [opennic-discuss] Website Punctuation, mike, 01/17/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Christopher, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Jeff Taylor, 01/06/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, waqas, 01/06/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Mike, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Simon, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, waqas, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, waqas, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Simon, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Simon, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, waqas, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Simon, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Simon, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, waqas, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, waqas, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, Simon, 01/07/2013
- Re: [opennic-discuss] DNS server, David Norman, 01/06/2013
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