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  • From: mike <mike AT pikeaero.com>
  • To: discuss AT lists.opennicproject.org
  • Subject: [opennic-discuss] Website Punctuation
  • Date: Thu, 17 Jan 2013 03:13:10 -0600
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Regarding http://www.opennicproject.org

I think the punctuation might be a little confusing here, and may
require a double-take on the part of the first-time reader:

"Are you looking for an alternative DNS provider, that is open and
democratic – Concerned about censorship?"

Isn't that two separate sentences posed as two distinct questions?

Also I don't believe the comma after 'provider' is required.

Perhaps something like the following?

"Are you looking for an alternative DNS provider that is open and
democratic? – Concerned about censorship?"

Alternatively, perhaps combined into a single sentence as follows?

"Are you looking for an alternative DNS provider that is open and
democratic, or are you concerned about censorship?"

Website looks and works great! Nice work guys!

- --Mike

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